【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
. j+ `& q1 ^1 }- T5 i0 D) I+ oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: e5 \6 o4 _9 O) }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' w$ {5 F& W0 M& h9 Q+ RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# U1 ?4 E( F& |5 M8 p' P0 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 b& r4 c/ [$ u$ v: Q1 aI want to confess that I love you,
3 q) _( I! J  C4 }* uBut I never did
2 M1 I  I5 _& @: g1 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* X% }8 o* |! `- c) ~& {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- m& s! G9 e4 J4 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ O8 k" u- z8 `( ^Can I entrust it to you?
3 m- }! m. R- P9 `& b2 b, lEntrust my love within your heart
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' k4 f1 U: A. C) q+ K& z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 ~. l; y) O  a  k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# y+ k- \3 ]/ L9 b7 g. M, U9 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 b5 J& y* S4 B  b# S# y/ X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% f. S* o% Y4 p4 Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) s- C4 g  \; y! h& ^) f+ z$ H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 ?( N9 m% [2 o5 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# ]+ n3 D4 L* u  x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' \( b! d5 {4 P6 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# Z9 [4 m/ M# l' e  a3 P8 `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 S" ]" ~) z1 Z/ ~- g5 O( }0 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ `; y; V! O9 x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ w5 E$ |, W3 W8 ~% s; {, g3 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" i1 w4 s4 t/ O7 u2 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 A/ z) B3 e8 m* G8 U/ u! ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! m/ _. G" z) ~! q4 G7 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; N& V- s2 ^. x% V, f4 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 W5 Y7 u$ z' p0 R& D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, Y8 ?/ g/ J6 v9 p! F0 a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% E8 \# }/ L4 H; D' d3 i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ R5 p: x( C1 @2 j+ }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 [# K; B" b- y+ \) j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 k4 G) f, O8 |. n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 J- h- q7 J8 ~; ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" k- Z9 D- j  M3 I# t6 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% ?: r( e1 T0 a0 j3 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 g& o( k$ p+ {" `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: ?5 p- g$ u; P- P& V1 w4 o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 e8 Y6 ?) ?. u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 a* x5 F+ k. ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>